A friend has invited you to a family dinner at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: thank him/her for inviting you ask for suggestions what you want to bring as a gift make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

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Dear Jenny, Hope

this

letter

finds you with radiant health and the best of your spirits.It's been so long since we've had a meet-up and reminisced the things .I'd like to thank you for the

letter

that you sent me

last

week regarding

family

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dinner at your house. I was extremely happy after reading your

letter

about you

are

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inviting me for dinner at your place with you and your family.As you know, we wanted to enjoy each other's company

from

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for

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so long and

finally

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the

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apply

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time.I am immensely excited.Anyways,Could you suggest

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to me

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about

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what can I bring as a gift for your family?I am thinking of bringing a wall clock .Isn't it a good idea?What do you think?I prefer to get something special and useful but I'm really confused.You are the best person who can give me

right

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suggestion

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suggestions

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Moreover

,after my visit

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your place,I am expecting you to come to my place for lunch with my family and fiance.It'd be very special for me if you will meet my loved ones.Please tell me in your next

letter

about the best day for you .I will wait for your reply. Say hello to my Uncle and Aunt. Warm Wishes, Ann

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7 paragraphs

202 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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