The diagram below shows be changes of a village in 1995 and now.

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The maps illustrate the transformation of a hamlet from 1995 to the present. From an

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perspective, it is evident that the village has witnessed significant changes, cutting down natural beauty spots and farmland

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adding more housing and other facilities. Over the period shown, the most striking development could be seen in the eastern area of the village in which the area used for agricultural purposes has been turned into a golf course.

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, the adjacent forest park has been converted into a tennis centre, and a car park has been added to the hotel to the southeast of the town. In the vicinity of the seafront, there used to be a fishing port, but it vanished completely. Because of

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, the nearby fish market has been replaced with a number of apartments. Near the same place, a myriad of restaurants has now been constructed right on the sites where the shops used to be.

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small community has witnessed an increase in the number of houses in the central area.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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