The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The purpose of
this
report is to provide data pertaining to the procedure of how aluminium
cans
are recycled.
Overall
, the process involved various stages,
concemming
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consuming
with the used
cans
and culminating in the collection. In the first step, the
cans
are threw
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in the cabins/
recyling
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recycling
bins before it is reused. At
this
stage, the rate of aluminium
recycle
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is 74%, which occurs in
United
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Kingdom.
Following
this
, the
cans
will be
recyled
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recycled
and rolled with
the
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a
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certain thick. The process continues with heating and melting the
cans
, at
this
point, workers will
cleaning
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clean
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, sorting,
shredding
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shred
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and
compressing
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compress
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them.
Subsequently
, the
cans
are collected and contained in the truck. Having
complete
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all these stages, the process can begin again.
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