The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The purpose of

this

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report is to provide data pertaining to the procedure of how aluminium

cans

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are recycled.

Overall

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, the process involved various stages,

concemming

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consuming

with the used

cans

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and culminating in the collection. In the first step, the

cans

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are threw

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in the cabins/

recyling

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recycling

bins before it is reused. At

this

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stage, the rate of aluminium

recycle

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recycling

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is 74%, which occurs in

United

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Kingdom.

Following

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this

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, the

cans

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will be

recyled

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recycled

and rolled with

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a

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certain thick. The process continues with heating and melting the

cans

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, at

this

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point, workers will

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, sorting,

shredding

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shred

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and

compressing

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compress

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them.

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, the

cans

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are collected and contained in the truck. Having

complete

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completed

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all these stages, the process can begin again.