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It has been suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In addition
 to studying the school’s main subjects, elementary children now nurtured gifted courses like swimming, chess, …
Besides
, some people give
opinion
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 that schools should encourage children to learn how to grow
plants
 and take care of
animals
. In my perspective, the advantages of
this
 approach outweigh the disadvantages. In order to start, if these are compulsory subjects, few
students
 have to study without their own desires.
This
 can have a negative effect
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 pupils’ learning results.
Moreover
, some primary
students
 living in urban areas do not tend to plant vegetables
or
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 some living in apartments are not allowed to have pets. So for them, learning about raising
plants
 and keeping
animals
 will not be helpful.
Finally
,
this
 course can add more stress to
students
. Primary kids already face a lot of pressure to do well on their examinations, so schools should not burden them more.
However
, there are several benefits of
this
 teaching method.
Students
 acquire more knowledge about
plants
 and
animals
, which will be
favorable
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 for some subjects at school
such
 as biology and science. Not only that, children can learn how to be responsible with something that they are taking care of. From there, it can create positive hobbies,
instead
 of watching TV or using mobile phones all day. In summary,
although
 teaching knowledge about taking care of
animals
 and growing
plants
for
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 elementary
students
 may have some drawbacks, the advantages of
this
 teaching method
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 undeniable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • primary children
  • grow vegetables
  • keep animals
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • practical skills development
  • environmental awareness
  • health benefits
  • instilling responsibility
  • learning about food production
  • time commitment
  • maintenance costs
  • safety concerns
  • curriculum constraints
  • limited resources
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