when a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. it is pointless to try and keep them alive. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays

technology

develops every day and causes fading out of previous traditional ways of life.

This

essay will discuss what can lead to the popularity of

technology

and if it is better to live as

people

used to. First of all, the development of

technology

improves social activities

such

as communication, studying, working and

entertaining

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. Today

people

can easily talk with each other

due to

social media, and apps,

for example

, Whatsapp is a really good app to communicate with your friends, family members and other

people

.

Moreover

, the modernization of

technology

made studying way easier, there are a lot of videos, courses and articles all over the internet to help many students and employers. Modern skills

,

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and ways of life help us not to spend hours,

for instance

,

people

make online shops to save time by sitting at home and choosing what they need to purchase, which makes online shops to be more convenient.

As a result

, the traditional skills

were

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disappeared by innovations.

However

, many

people

stopped doing physical activity

due to

new

technology

, we use chats a lot,

instead

of going out and meeting our friends or relatives.

Nevertheless

, modern vehicles and factories contribute to the pollution of the ecosystem and

thus

cause a detrimental effect on our world and humanity. At

this

point, the traditional ways of moving were less damaging to

people

and nature. In conclusion, I want to say that the advancement of

technology

has more privileges to society

such

as human development and civilisation.