The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how the solar panel is used to heat
air
and
water
.
Overall
, the panel consists of four main parts. It has a see-through top, the input and output channels that
supplies
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the sources, and the main box.
First,
to heat the
air
, the solar panel is opened from the box and let out in the open to generate energy from the sun. Cool
air
is let in through the inlet
pipe
,
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when the sun heats on top of the solar, it warms up the
air
which is
then
released through the warm
air
outlet.
Similarly
, the panels for heating the
water
have the same parts,
that is
; the open top, the box, and the in and out
pipe
.
Therefore
, cold
water
is transferred into the
pipe
and after receiving heat
for
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the sun, the solar energy warms up the
water
.
This
water
is ready for domestic
used
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and let out through the hot
water
pipe
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, water, pipe with synonyms.
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