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You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for 2 weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him to accompany you. In your letter, – explain where and when you want to go – give details of the travel, dates and costs involved – describe some of the things you want to do

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Dear John, It's been so long since we met each other but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we spent
last
 year. I am planning to spend my two-week summer holidays in
France
. I would like to ask you to travel with me to
France
 to fulfil our wish to explore the Eiffel Tower and the Louver Museum. I am planning to travel on May 02, ,2023 on Qatar Airways to Paris and stay in Paris for one week and visit another part of
France
 in another week. I have contacted ABC tour operating company and they have a promotional sale for a French trip which has 8000 euros for one person including flight tickets and hotel bookings, but it's not included the food except breakfast. I would like to visit
also
 the countryside of
France
, which I discussed with the tour operator and they promised
me
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to include that in the trip. If you would like to join me on the trip let me know before next Monday. With love. Jennifer.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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