The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992.

The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad

between 1983 and 1992.
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The graph illustrates how many
cases
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of diarrhoea in Mashhad over a period of 9 years from 1983 to 1992. In the first year, they stood at 100
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and remained stable until 1985. The following year, the figure doubled and reach 200
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. After that,
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of
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minimally rose before they saw a noticeable decrease over the next 5 years back to the same level as 1983.
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downward trend was suddenly broken and the
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of
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boomed and reached a peak. They were quadrupled, which means that they were 400
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in 1989. Until end of the 1991, the figure did not have a remarkable change, but they had slight a fall between 1989 and 1990.
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, the
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of
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experienced a huge plunge to hit a dip level in the figure.
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, the
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of
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of diarrhoea in Mashhad had an upward and downward trend throughout the period.
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they were at their highest
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in 1989,
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they had zero
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of diarrhoea in Masshad in 1992.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cases, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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