The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The given chart illustrates the number of each type of digital
games’
sales internationally between 2000 and 2006. The most obvious piece of information is that all Change noun form
games
of
Change preposition
apply
digital
Add an article
the digital
games
was
increasing gradually except for console Correct subject-verb agreement
were
games
which was
declined over time.
As is observed, it is obvious that online Unnecessary verb
apply
games
jump twice in
every two years as same as mobile phone Change preposition
apply
games
which rise up to 6$BN for six years. Meanwhile, the progress of handheld
remained static. Correct article usage
the handheld
On the contrary
, console games
srinked
to 50% for 6 years.
Correct your spelling
sprinkled
To sum up
, digital games
was
increasingly developing over time and became Change the verb form
were
people
choice to enjoy their time.Change noun form
people's
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words games with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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