In some countries, children are often told that can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
In today's world it is common to see that
parents
sometimes told their children
that only if they work hard and are hardworking, they might achieve anything. Obviously, saying such
a statement to children
has its own positive and negative sides.
Talking about advantages, such
a message can boost children
's motivation to work and study harder, they will learn different useful skills. If they understand this
statement correctly, they will work hard to achieve their aims and personal goals. For example
, my friend was very talented, he could understand all the topics very quickly, and he did not put a lot of effort into that. Unfortunately, he was very lazy. He did not do any homework at all. In addition
, he refused to participate in different competitions which would be beneficial for them in the future. But when his parents
discussed with my classmate his problem and gave him relevant reasons why he had to do homework, he finally
started learning even better than before.
Concerning drawbacks, some children
can be under parents
' pressure and they will have a fear of making their parents
disappointed if they do not do well. It can develop different mental illnesses, such
as depression. Nowadays, a lot of people from all over the world, especially adolescents, are suffering from this
disease.
In conclusion, I would like to point out that persuading children
to study hard can be beneficial and not worthy at the same time, it depends on children
, because they all are different. If parents
want to make their child study better, it is better to find a specific method for him or her.Submitted by gulnara.7676 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite