some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use is it a positive or negative development

Although

some nations have owned international achievements which

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specialized

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facilities

for top

athletes

instead

of installing normal

equipments

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to

residents

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access effortlessly to

sports

, I believe that

this

escalation is negative On the one hand, people should recognize the fact that why the leaders of nations

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the world are willing to pay

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large amount of money for providing specialized tools . One simple explanation is they desire individuals who are prone to have

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inborn potential with

sports

,

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likely to develop their ability.

For example

,

this

activity will assist top

athletes

to move on to sections to train quickly

instead

of sacrificing a lot of time for avoiding transport on roads

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rush hours. Another explanation is the

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rates of top

athletes

have

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to escalate vigorously.

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,

this

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rates will be allied to their nation's reputations associated with accruing not sorely their financial position but

also

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of residents.

On the other hand

, apart from the

pratical

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practical

merits expressed above , t believe that

this

is a negative expansion.

Firstly

,

although

specialized

facilities

aid top

athletes

to have a beneficial outcome , the

facilities

are unsuitable

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ordinary citizens who have demands to access

to

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normal exercises . To illustrate

this

point , I would like to mention that the elderly are not able to go to places containing specialized tools , they are prone to do basic exercises

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normal and popular

equipments

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.

Additionally

, another reason is

this

trend will discourage

citizes

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citizens

cities

to do exercise regularly and eventually restrict their desire

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sports

.

For instance

, my mom has given up her sedentary lifestyle attributed to the development of

sports

facilities

in my residential area. In conclusion ,

it is clear that

this

activity has existed several merits, contributing numerous achievements to the development of nations.

However

, I believe that

this

evolution is negative.