some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use is it a positive or negative development

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some nations have owned international achievements which

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specialized

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facilities

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for top

athletes

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of installing normal

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access effortlessly to

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escalation is negative On the one hand, people should recognize the fact that why the leaders of nations

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the world are willing to pay

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large amount of money for providing specialized tools . One simple explanation is they desire individuals who are prone to have

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inborn potential with

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likely to develop their ability.

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,

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activity will assist top

athletes

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to move on to sections to train quickly

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of sacrificing a lot of time for avoiding transport on roads

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rush hours. Another explanation is the

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rates of top

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to escalate vigorously.

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this

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rates will be allied to their nation's reputations associated with accruing not sorely their financial position but

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life

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of residents.

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practical

merits expressed above , t believe that

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is a negative expansion.

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specialized

facilities

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aid top

athletes

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to have a beneficial outcome , the

facilities

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are unsuitable

with

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ordinary citizens who have demands to access

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normal exercises . To illustrate

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point , I would like to mention that the elderly are not able to go to places containing specialized tools , they are prone to do basic exercises

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normal and popular

equipments

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.

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trend will discourage

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citizens

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to do exercise regularly and eventually restrict their desire

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sports

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.

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, my mom has given up her sedentary lifestyle attributed to the development of

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facilities

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in my residential area. In conclusion ,

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activity has existed several merits, contributing numerous achievements to the development of nations.

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evolution is negative.