You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a third-year student and am writing to you to purpose some improvements to the college's
cafeteria
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. The
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is located near the library which is really convenient for students.
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, the menu provides you with different options, so everybody can choose a dish which is suitable for them.
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, the staff are really polite and attentive which makes the place even better.
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, there are some problems that I have recently encountered .
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, the toilets are not enough for the customers.
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, the air conditioner is not working properly, so most of the time the temperature inside the
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is intolerable for many people. I believe that your magazine can help students to bring the authorities' attention to
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subject. I, on behalf of many students, would like to purpose some recommendations. The college can install more toilets in the area just behind the
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, and they can replace the old air conditioner with a new one. Student Union is completely ready to contribute part of the cost, so I believe that the will not be a big problem.
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, I would like to thank the editor for all the helps and supports. Yours faithfully, Amir Ghasemi
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