You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a third-year student and am writing to you to purpose some improvements to the college's
cafeteria
. The
cafeteria
is located near the library which is really convenient for students.
Moreover
, the menu provides you with different options, so everybody can choose a dish which is suitable for them.
Also
, the staff are really polite and attentive which makes the place even better.
However
, there are some problems that I have recently encountered .
Firstly
, the toilets are not enough for the customers.
Furthermore
, the air conditioner is not working properly, so most of the time the temperature inside the
cafeteria
is intolerable for many people. I believe that your magazine can help students to bring the authorities' attention to
this
subject. I, on behalf of many students, would like to purpose some recommendations. The college can install more toilets in the area just behind the
cafeteria
, and they can replace the old air conditioner with a new one. Student Union is completely ready to contribute part of the cost, so I believe that the will not be a big problem.
Lastly
, I would like to thank the editor for all the helps and supports. Yours faithfully, Amir Ghasemi
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