Dear Mr. Paterson,
I am writing to tell you that, I am unable to move to your apartment on time, as we planned. Please, allow me to elaborate on the situation in detail.
I work as a project manager in an IT consulting firm. I have organized an important contract for my firm with one Chinese tech giant, but something went wrong. My boss has organized a business trip for me to solve the problem in Beijing with the client on the spot.
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, I will be in China for almost the whole next week, and I can not transport my personal belongings to a new flat on Monday.
I am returning from the trip on Friday and going to hire a transportation company to help me on Saturday. I am still interested in the apartment
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and am ready to do an advance payment if necessary. Please, get in touch with me to discuss details.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Vasilii Rasskazov