The chart illustrates how waste papers are recycled.

The given chart shows the process involved in recycling misuse Letters. There are six steps in the progress, from collecting waste papers to utilizing

paper

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making machine.

The first step is

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that misuse Letters are collected from business districts

along with

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public

paper

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banks and the next

stage

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would need labourers who are responsible for removing the inappropriate

paper

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, it is

also

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accompanied by grading.

Following

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this

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this

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massive amount is delivered to the

paper

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mill; a

stage

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which is called: transportation. At

this

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point, the cleaning

stage

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is commenced at which point it includes cleaning, pulping and

also

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removing other materials like staples. The next

stage

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is called De_inking, again

this

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step is designed to remove unwanted materials in the name of inks

as well as

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glues before taking way to the

last

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step which is done by electrical gadgets. Eventually, a

paper

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-making machine is utilized for the manufacture of utilizable

paper

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

153 words

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