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Logging rainforest has serious effect on environment causing extinction of animals and human life.do you agree or disagree

#rainforest #effect #environment #extinction #animals #life
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Many people assert that clearing the
rainforests
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 poses an existential threat to both humans and
animals
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. Admittedly, I believe that deforestation in
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 areas can have a devastating impact on the life of different species owing to compelling reasons, which will be elaborated on in
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 essay.
To begin
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 with, the elimination of
rainforests
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 will change the lives of many
animals
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.
That is
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, the more these spots are destructed, the fewer places would be available for many
animals
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 to live in.
This
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 put many endangered
animals
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 on the verge of extinction. Take some species of reptile which is living in
rainforests
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 as an example; since they are only capable of living in a specific climate, the loss of their natural habitat means that they soon become extinct.
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 in turn will result in the disappearance of other
animals
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 which prey on the the reptiles.
Furthermore
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, another compelling argument against the destruction of
rainforests
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 is concerned with humans. Because a considerable amount of oxygen is produced by the trees which are located in
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 areas, cutting down the trees means there would be severe consequences.
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, there will be more polluted cities in the world. A direct result of more cities with intolerable air quality is more people will be infected with lung cancer which put the human race in real danger.
To sum up
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, considering the points discussed above, deforestation in the
rainforests
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 may increase the risk of elimination of various species because it reduces the production of oxygen, and may cause interruption in the food chain.
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