You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates changes in the number of overseas tourists visiting three European countries between 1987 and 2007. At the onset, it is obvious, that the coast was the most popular place at the beginning of the given period starting with 40 000 overseas visitors. In 1992 it slightly fluctuated but
then
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started to rise quickly and reached the highest
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of 75 000 in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the lakes were the least popular place with 10 000 tourists in 1987.
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, it rapidly increased to 1997 and stayed at a
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of 40 000 a little and continued to grow to 70 000 in 2002. The visitors to the mountains were 20 000 at the beginning of the period and slightly raised after 20 years to 35 000. In 2002 after achieving the highest
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of 75 000 lakes visitors dramatically started to fall down and finished at the
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of 50 000 in 2007.
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