Teleworking has been on the increase in recent years. Do you think this is a negative or postive development ?

In recent times, the use of the Internet is rapidly increasing. Ever since the pandemic, working from home has become very common. Though
this
has negative impacts like affecting the productivity of
work
, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of the development.
To begin
with, one of the positive aspects of online
work
is accessibility. A person can
work
from anywhere in the world, there are no in-person meetings or presentations.
For instance
, you can attend meetings
while
you pick up your child from school.
Furthermore
, teleworking employees could have more quality time with their loved ones
while
working, enriching the
work
-life balance.
In addition
to
this
, there is no hustle and bustle in the mornings to reach the office on time, guaranteeing a good sleep. Since
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remote working has a positive effect on employees, many companies in Singapore have allowed their workers to
work
from home at least once a week.
On the other hand
, though it has many positive effects on the employees, it is detrimental to the
organisations
because employers cannot monitor whether all the workers are working or not.
This
could lead to less productivity impacting the growth of a company. There is
also
a possibility of an employee working for different
organisations
. In India, during the post-pandemic, many software engineers working from home were found to be working for more than 2
organisations
at a time. These are completely unacceptable and
organisations
should take steps to keep an eye on the employee
while
working remotely. To sum it up, even though
this
development has both positive and negative impacts, I think it is advantageous because the negative could be overcome by simply implementing some regulations to monitor the workers
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