The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the digit of
foreigner
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foreigners
vistor
to Correct your spelling
visitor
visitors
three
different places in a European nation from 1987 to 2007.
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Overall
, we can Linking Words
observ
in Correct your spelling
observe
line
chart that mentioned Correct article usage
the line
three
different Use synonyms
area
which Change to a plural noun
areas
are
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is
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coast
, Correct article usage
the coast
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mountain
and Fix the agreement mistake
mountains
lakes
, where Use synonyms
most
visited Correct article usage
the most
place
by visitors was Use synonyms
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lakes
, and less visited Correct article usage
the lakes
place
was Use synonyms
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Add an article
a mountain
the mountain
mountain
.
On the one hand, The Fix the agreement mistake
mountains
lakes
visited ratio in 1987 Use synonyms
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
drastic
declined which was 10 Change the word
drastically
thounsands
, it Correct your spelling
thousands
thousand
continuesly
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continued
rose
till 2002 (75 thousand) Change the verb form
to rise
that
was Correct pronoun usage
apply
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
vistor
ratio among Correct your spelling
visitor
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three
Correct article usage
the three
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place
, Change to a plural noun
places
then
suddenly again dropped in 2007, 50 Linking Words
thousands
. The Change to singular
thousand
mountain
was Use synonyms
lowest
traveller Correct article usage
the lowest
place
by overseas Use synonyms
peoples
from 1987 to 2007. The Fix the agreement mistake
people
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coast
ratio was 40 Correct your spelling
cost
thousands
in 1987, Change to singular
thousand
then
it minimally decreased in 1992, it significantly Linking Words
continuess
Correct your spelling
continued
increased
till 2007 Replace the word
increase
where
75 thousand travellers Correct word choice
when
were
visited in 2007.
Unnecessary verb
apply
In contrast
, In 1987 compared to all Linking Words
three
areas, Use synonyms
top
rate visited Correct article usage
the top
place
was Use synonyms
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coast
by outlanders, Correct article usage
the coast
on
Change preposition
in
second
number Correct article usage
the second
mountain
area, and Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
place
was Use synonyms
lowest
visited in Correct article usage
the lowest
Correct article usage
the begining
begining
year. In 2007, Correct your spelling
beginning
highest
visited Add an article
the highest
place
was Use synonyms
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coast
(75), Correct article usage
the coast
second
number Correct article usage
the second
place
was Use synonyms
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lakes
, and 3rd Correct article usage
the lakes
place
was Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the mountain
mountain
which was Fix the agreement mistake
mountains
lowest
Correct article usage
the lowest
in
among Change preposition
apply
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three
places.Correct article usage
the three
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, coast, mountain, lakes, place with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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