Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that because of safety control, beauty and medical products are tested before

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in humans. Some of them believed that these testing are necessary to help human health conditions

as well as

diseases

while

others thought that

this

is

unbelievably

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cruel thing to do with

animals

. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides and give reasons why I support that testing is beneficial to humanity.

To begin

with, opponents of

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statement,

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strongly believe that

animals

have equal rights to live as humans. It is undeniable and

unmoral

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immoral

that

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animals

for medical research,

moreover

, we give them many diseases because of experiments.

For instance

, we have been using laboratory mice for many

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drugs in order to save

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life and cure

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the disease

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disease

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since 1960.

In

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we are utilizing

animals

,

such

as rabbits and apes, for even beauty products which

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not essential to

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health condition.

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almost 97

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of

animals

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died end of the experiment and it is more than 110 million

animals

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.

On the other hand

, advocates are believed that

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amount of suffering of rabbits and mice will be justified if

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life has saved. Especially they strongly thought that if

this

condition happened to their family members or close

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will choose animal experiments more than animal right. There is uncountable successes in

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field until now. To give

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example, in 2019 we

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faced

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viral infection which is the COVID nineteen. Before vaccination, we had lost more than one million people,

however

, thankfully testing after with mice, we can obtain vaccines for

this

dangerous infectious disease. In conclusion, experiments

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laboratory

animal

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animals

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are

unethical

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and cruel thing to all species of

animal

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animals

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.

However

,

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are outweighed

drawbacks

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in my view. In

further

, we have to minimize their suffering and testing for these

animals

as much as possible.