Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: ● Explain why you cannot go anymore ● Say who can go instead of you ● Say why this person is a good person to go with

Dear Ali, I hope you are doing well, I am writing to you to tell you, I can't come

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home for watching

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a movie

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7th June. I am really sorry to not be capable to come

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together because of

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project of my brother he requests me to stay at home for helping and he asked me to create the PowerPoint for him, as you know, my brother is catastrophic in technology and the time of her presentation is exactly

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7 June, so I am obligated to cancel our meeting.

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, I want to present Mohen to you, as you completely know, Mohsen is our common friend and he has a lot of free time

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these days and I am sure

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person has a huge ambition to see you, so please accept my suggestion and you really will be so happy for watching the film with Mohsen. I am looking forward to catching up with you soon. Regards, Rahman

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