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Studies show that many criminals do not receive enough education. For this reason, people believe that the best ways to reduce crime is to educate them so they can find a job after being released. Do you agree or disagree?

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There are many pieces of research depicting people committing crimes as the result of a lack of literacy.
This
 leads to many people holding a belief that educating them is the optimal way to have crime reduction as they can seek job opportunities after being released. Personally, I am in agreement with
this
 opinion. On the one hand, the main reason why lacking schooling is the root of crime is education is the place teaching people about the norms and standard of living in society.
Criminals
 used to do whatever their preference is regardless of how wrongness of their actions were,
this
 is because of the fact that they didn't learn about the consequences of their activities.
This
 led to some individuals who making crimes
had
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 regretted their actions.
Therefore
, education will be a tool for them to change their way of life and support their situations much better.
On the other hand
, educating
criminals
 helps them harness their potential talent of themselves. Provided that these
criminals
 accept learning properly, their efforts are likely to be observed by the communities, when their prison life of them come to an end, their working effort can help society grow in term of economy and employment. Creating a better future for those
criminals
. Admittedly, the stubbornness of some part of
criminals
 during schooling will limit the effectiveness of
this
 method.
Therefore
, other harsh solutions are required to improve these circumstances
such
 as punishments, ... In conclusion, education helps
criminals
 gain positive insights into their lives and understand the consequences of each negative action they made. Resulting in an improvement in crime reduction.
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