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Some feel that it is impossible for a country to be economically progressive and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

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People
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 have debatable views about the impacts of economic development on the environment. Some argue that it is impossible for a
country
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 to grow economically without damaging its surroundings, I,
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 others believe the environment can be protected
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 carrying out several developmental activities for a nation.
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 matter. 
Over the past few decades, the world has erected many multi-storied buildings to provide for the needs of educational institutions, shopping malls, industries etc. These developments have been made at the price of deforestation.
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 leads to the belief that every economically progressive step is only going to destroy our surroundings. Because of
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people
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 usually question any step taken for the economic growth of a
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. 

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,
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 nowadays are more worried about protecting nature than ever before.
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 concern is giving rise to creative and innovative ideas in many scientific fields. Battery vehicles,
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, have gained immense popularity and acceptance in the automobile sector.
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 are making conscious decisions of shifting to battery vehicles to preserve fuel. There have been many other environment-friendly innovations
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 as CNG gas, solar power etc.
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 displays a careful mindset of
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 who want to work towards a
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's development and at the same time, preserve its nature and landscape. History might scare many of us to believe that economic
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 can only have damaging implications for our surroundings.
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, I strongly disagree with
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 as things have changed for good in recent years.
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, today, many environmentally friendly substitutes have been invented to cater to the needs of a
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's growth and its financial development, ensuring no harm to nature.
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