Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertising? What measures can be taken to protect them?
Nowadays, the development of promotion brands from
the
variety of companies is encountered by buyers. In my opinion, even though Correct article usage
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this
issue will create the alteration of people
’s lifestyle
, it still can be prevented Fix the agreement mistake
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the way which will be elucidated rigorously by me in Change preposition
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First and foremost, facing the continuing improvement of an advertisement variety will be hard for some people
as they have no ability to hold their desire to buy those products. This
tendency is caused by various ads made by the
companies which are Correct article usage
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so that consumers will be compelled to open the web. Wrong verb form
entertaining
For example
, teenagers who previously tend to saving
, after they felt curious to visit the platform, Change the verb form
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they
will explore all of the products there and just buy one for the first time, but in the following Correct pronoun usage
apply
days
it is inevitable that they will repurchase. Add a comma
,days
Hence
, they will become hedonistic individuals who spend a lot of money without thinking about how its
brings advantages to their life.
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it
Secondly
, the sophistication of web browsers helps people
so much in terms of reducing the pop-up time of advertisements because that is
the major reason that leads people
to be consumptive, in which this
marvel of human ingenuity can be the major solution to solve this
problem. Furthermore
, inhabitants can easily filter whether they want to see the ads or not through the option
button in each web browser. Change the noun form
options
Consequently
, on no account will advertisements appear on their device.
To conclude
, the effect of increasing the amount of advertising totally shifts our previous positive habitual
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However
, I strongly believe that only later do people
feel immediately protected after they apply advice
provided in Add an article
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