The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
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It is interesting to see how the age and gender structures are built in two completely different countries and cultures as are France and India showing the demographic aspects of each one
as well as
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how both societies are composed in 1984. These statistics might seem contradictory
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population size in both scenarios,
nevertheless
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, it is important to highlight the fact that at
this
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period, India is an underdeveloped country possessing a low life expectancy and France is going through one of its brightest eras. On one hand, the European country has a well-distributed age structure which takes into account genders. On the chart, it exhibits more like a rectangular shape with a slight reduction towards the older ones.
On the other hand
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, the age and gender of the Asian country's distribution is more irregular, with a well-developed birth rate and a strong emphasis on younger generations.
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, the graph is built with a pyramidal sharp-edged form. The Asian nation has a symmetrical buildout in terms of gender, with approximately equal sides between women and men compared to the European nation.
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, France’s life expectancy is more or less 15 years bigger. Despite the latter fact, India’s birth rate and young population are 3% bigger than France's.
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  • charts
  • age structure
  • populations
  • France
  • India
  • 1984
  • overall
  • different
  • evenly distributed
  • proportion
  • young people
  • elderly individuals
  • largest age group
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