The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA.
The table demonstrates several demographics of Americans in three different states, namely, California,
Utah
and Florida. The criteria selected for the comparison include age, average income and impoverished population. As a whole, Use synonyms
Utah
consisted of tremendous statistics in all arenas except the personal economy. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Florida denoted a slower birth rate than the death rate.
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Utah
possessed a higher population of children at 28%, meanwhile accounting for a comparatively lesser number of older people at 8%. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, Florida comprised the least number of youngsters at 16%, Linking Words
whereas
, a significant number of elders were detected at 23%.
Most importantly, Californians showed the highest average income out of all the three states that recorded $23,000, contrary to Linking Words
Utah
which denoted the slightest figures of $17,000. Use synonyms
Moreover
, California showcased a multitude of underprivileged residents at 16%, Linking Words
while
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Utah
exhibited the fewest quantity at 9% in Use synonyms
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