In many countries, people now wear western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than the traditional clothing. Why? (Reasons and relevant examples) Is this a positive or negative development?

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In today's modernised world, there's

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pressure of being wisely dressed everywhere. Western

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has been globally recognised and is considered the most suitable in every setup.

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, traditional

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are losing their identity every day.

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due to

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globalization where people can trade in many different nations or countries, western suits or suits have been glorified as global

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, in my ,eyes the trend of wearing Western

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is justifiable and understandable.

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with, most of the corporate world, where people from divergent nations deal, have their own dress code to follow which usually includes Western

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rather than being in traditional

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there can be people from different communities who can have their own cultural costumes which don'

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look good at a point in time. Apart from formal setup, in day-to-day life too it can sometimes create awkward moments for one in traditional

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especially when they are in another state or a country where those outfits aren'

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easily available.

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, finding Western

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is much more convenient. To illustrate, if a lady from Punjab in India visits the United States, it can become difficult for her to find scarves for her traditional Punjabi suits.

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, as Western outfits are available internationally, US women can'

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find it difficult to buy a pair of jeans or a top from Punjab if they travel to India. At

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, being in a cultural outfit can require a number of accessories being worn together which can'

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be easily available everywhere we travel as locals are not aware of those things. So you have no other option left to be in the Western suit.

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, I can reaffirm that being adjusted to Western clothing has more positive development on

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society as a whole. It is represented as a single nation. Though, we shouldn'

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forget our culture and should be connected to cultural apparel when there's a family function or party.

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In many countries, people now wear western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than the traditional clothing. Why? (Reasons and relevant examples) Is this a positive or negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

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