The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009.
The table displays a comparison between the weights of
men
and Use synonyms
women
, spanning a decade from 1999 to 2009.
For the duration of the decade, normal Use synonyms
weight
was the highest proportion for both Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
, fluctuating around the 50% margin. The largest deviation from 50% was for Use synonyms
men
in 1999, where there were 41% of Use synonyms
men
who had normal Use synonyms
weight
.
The data for Use synonyms
women
showed consistency between all three Use synonyms
weight
ranges, with the underweight category having 27-29%, normal Use synonyms
weight
being 47-51% and overweight being 18-21%, with the ranges in data being 2%, 4% and 3% respectively. The range in data for Use synonyms
men
, was Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
, bigger for all three categories - 3%, 7% and 11% respectively, which shows a greater spread.
The largest change was seen for Add the comma(s)
,however
men
in the overweight section as there was a decrease in overweight Use synonyms
men
from 1999 to 2009.
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To conclude
, the Linking Words
weight
of the Use synonyms
women
in Use synonyms
this
particular country was stable and did not see a significant difference. The Linking Words
weight
of the Use synonyms
men
in Use synonyms
this
same country fluctuated more than the Linking Words
women
, with the greatest difference seen in the overweight category. As the normal Use synonyms
weight
category increased slightly, it may be assumed that the overweight Use synonyms
men
lost Use synonyms
weight
to become Use synonyms
normal
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