The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below
The bar chart shows the proportion of
boys
and girls
, aged 5-14 years, engaging in five different activities in Australia.
The modal activity
is watching TV/videos with 100% of boys
and 100% of girls
engaging in this
form of leisure. Boys
overshadowed the girls
in skateboarding, bike riding and electronic/computer
games
, whereas
girls
were the
higher proportion in arts and crafts. The largest difference in participation Change preposition
in the
of
Change preposition
in
activity
was seen in playing electronic/computer
games
, with approximately 80% of boys
and 60% girls
. The least favoured Change preposition
of girls
activity
for the boys
was arts and crafts, whilst it was skateboarding for the girls
.
Aside from watching TV and videos, the next popular activity
for boys
was playing electronic/computer
games
, meanwhile
there was a tie for the Add a comma
,meanwhile
girls
with bike riding and playing electronic/computer
games
; thus
the next populous activity
, after watching TV/videos, was playing electronic/computer
games
.
Therefore
, it is safe to say more children prefer their entertainment whilst relaxing and watching something rather than being required to physically move.Submitted by patelmeera on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, activity, computer, games with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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