The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevemt
Sugar
is processed from sugar
canes
in a multi-step procedure, which requires a high level of Fix the agreement mistake
cane
man power
and technology usage.
The Correct your spelling
manpower
sugar
canes take around 12-18 months to grow in order to be harvested. Once they are full term
, harvesting takes place either manually or using machinery. The process of manual labour provides jobs for locals but takes longer, Add a hyphen
full-term
whereas
using a tractor speeds up the process and requires less time and effort.
Once the sugar
canes are harvested, they are crushed to release the juices which is
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are
then
filtered using limestone. This
purifies the juice allowing pure sugar
cane juice to be used in the evaporator. This
is where the juice is turned into a syrup, to be centrifuged to separate the syrup from the sugar
crystals.
The sugar
crystals are then
cooled and dried, ready to be packaged and sold. This
whole process is long and requires different skill sets and technologies to carry out the steps efficiently.Submitted by patelmeera on
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