The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in on area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and charts indicate the information on the
police
budget
and evaluation of the wasted money
for police
in 2017 and 2018 in one region of Britain. From an overall
perspective, the total police
budget
has increased in 2018 compared to 2017. And the outcomes of money
spent are slightly punctuated in these two charts.
Firstly
, in 2017 and 2018, the total police
budget
comparatively raised from 304.7m to 318. 6m. The distributed amount of money
to the National Government 's 175.5 m
in 2017 up to 177.8 m
and the Local Taxes 91.2m up to 102.3 m
, also
other sources' amount of money
lifted by 0.5m, reached 38.5m in 2018.
Secondly
, about the wasted budget
on police
between 2017 and 2018, the police
salary fell from 75% to 69%. It is clear that
buildings and transport remained the same by 17%, also
technology has risen by 6% in 2018.
To sum up
, the police
budget
in 2017 and 2018, provided a slight amount of money
from the National Government, local taxes and other sources. The total budget
reached 318.6m, which increased by 13.9%. Moreover
, the spent of money
on salary is diminished by 6%. Whereas
the spent money
on techs is lifted by 6%.Submitted by Bolorbatbold99 on
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