The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps portray the current industrial
area
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and the future development of the town of Norbiton.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the town will undergo several changes, and the most significant of these will be the transformation of an industrial
area
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into a residential
area
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. Currently, the industrial
area
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is located on the east
side
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of the town, with a river at the north, separating the farmland from the industrial
area
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. There is a roundabout at the centre of the
area
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, with factories surrounding it. To the east of the roundabout, there is a roadway leading to another factory, with multiple factories along either
side
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. The roundabout connects the east roadway to the south main path. The proposed changes will completely reshape the landscape of the
area
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. Along the roundabout at the heart of the
area
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, the factories will be replaced by residences, shops, and a medical centre.
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, a mini-roundabout will be constructed to the south of the current one,
while
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a new T-intersection will
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be built from the north of the roundabout across the river, with residences along the western
side
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of the road. The farmland north of the river will be moved, and additional houses will be added on that
side
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. Another road will be added to the northwest of the big roundabout, where more houses will be built along the
side
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of
this
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street. Shops will be constructed to the southwest of the big roundabout,
whereas
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a medical centre will be located to its southeast. A school will be constructed to the east of the roundabout, in the middle of which will stand a new playground.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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