Traffic jams are a problem in many towns and cities today. Some people say that the solution is to build wider roads. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent times, traffic
congestion
has become a major problem in many cities and towns around the world. Some suggest widening up the
roads
could be the possible solution to address the issue. I strongly agree with
this
suggestion and
this
essay will examine the reasons why it cannot be a possible solution.
To begin
with, in most cities, widening the
roads
is not possible because of its infrastructure and it is quite a tedious process.
For instance
, the narrow
roads
in a developed city have high-rise buildings on both sides, to expand the
roads
, the buildings have to be demolished.
Furthermore
, broader
roads
do reduce
congestion
but do not have a significant effect as the problem is caused
due to
the number of vehicles.
Thus
, it is better to consider other feasible solutions to reduce the traffic.
On the other hand
, imposing higher taxes on private vehicles like cars can be implemented by the government.
This
gives an opportunity for the buyers to reconsider their decisions.
For example
, in Singapore, the government charges higher carbon emission taxes around 40,000$ when purchasing a car. Other methods like concessions for people travelling before peak hours and for people using public transportation.
This
could reduce the
congestion
during peak hours. To summarize, the expansion of
roads
is one of the possible solutions to tackle
congestion
but practically, it is not feasible and lesser effect on
congestion
compared to other means. Laws governing road and traffic could be modified to resolve the issue effectively.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each body paragraph focuses on a single clear point to enhance coherence.
task response
Stay closely focused on the topic throughout the essay to ensure a complete response.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traffic congestion
  • Alleviate
  • Commuter
  • Carpooling
  • Rush hour
  • Carbon footprint
  • Urban planning
  • Mixed-use neighborhoods
  • Cycling lanes
  • Pedestrian paths
  • Intelligent traffic systems
  • Congestion charges
  • Peak times
  • Telecommuting
  • Public transportation
  • Remote working policies
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