Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while others think it a negative development. Discuss both points and give your opinion.
Computers
are the most important invention of our time
. There have been competing views on whether computers
could surpass the intelligence of a human being. I believe this
should be seen as a negative development
because the improvement of a person will be affected.
The negative impact of computers
outperforming humans is that it could deter the development
of people
nowadays. For instance
, the usage of Artificial Intelligence is increasing. A specific example is Chat gpt, an AI that generates different essays or messages depending on the given description of a user. This
AI can create various answers with perfect grammar and has a wide range of words that is
entirely different for each user. Furthermore
, students were reportedly using this
specific AI to make their essay assignments and other writing homework, which the teachers are alarmed about. I think this
could have a negative effect on children’s development
because this
technology may promote laziness and the skills that should be improved will not progress.
On the other side, the advancement of computers
might be able to make human lives easier than ever because they could now have more time
for other things. People
can now more have time
to spend with families and friends. For instance
, jobs that are physically tiring like material movers will be replaced by computers
then
people
will not be tired as before. People
spending their time
driving will decrease because there will be driverless cars, which are controlled by computers
remotely. Although
there are many benefits, I believe that the development
of a person should be the top priority
In conclusion, I believe that computers
being able to surpass a human being is a negative impact because the personal growth of a person must be developed and more important.Submitted by angeline07 on
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