These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools.
A generation ago, teaching in a high school is
such
a well-respected and popular job and in some countries, this
is still true whereas
nowadays, in many parts of the world, there has been a sharp drop in the number of young people who want to be a high school teacher
. This
essay will look at the reason for this
and purpose some solutions.
One of the main causes of this
problem
is that the salary of a teacher
is much lower than many other jobs. The income comes
from teaching is less amount of money when it comes to compared to Correct pronoun usage
that comes
another professional jobs
Replace the adjective
another professional job
other professional jobs
such
as doctor
, engineer and IT developer. Add an article
a doctor
For instance
, in Myanmar, the amount of monthly income of a doctor who has five experiences in his respective field is tripled than
Correct word choice
that
a
Change preposition
of a
teacher
who has the same experiences
. To tackle Fix the agreement mistake
experience
this
issue, the government should raise the salaries significantly, which attract
people to consider Correct subject-verb agreement
attracts
this
job as a profession.
Another problem
is that children do not behave well in class. That is
to say, teachers have to deal with pupils who disobey them which lead to
give up easily and make them run out of their energies for nurturing playful student the whole day. Dealing with Correct pronoun usage
them to
this
issue, parents have the most responsibility to teach their child
to act politely and have respect for their teachers, in order to make children Fix the agreement mistake
children
to
behave well in class.
Change the verb form
apply
To sum up
, teaching has become a less popular job in recent days for some reasons like the low salaries and pupils’ behavior
. Change the spelling
behaviour
This
is a serious problem
, unless we get young talented people to become a teacher
, the academic future of our next generation will be damaged. My view is that the main responsibility for solving this
problem
lies with parents and the government.Submitted by hninayewuttyi.h on
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