These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools.

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A generation ago, teaching in a high school is
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a well-respected and popular job and in some countries,
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is still true
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nowadays, in many parts of the world, there has been a sharp drop in the number of young people who want to be a high school
teacher
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essay will look at the reason for
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and purpose some solutions. One of the main causes of
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problem
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is that the salary of a
teacher
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is much lower than many other jobs. The income
comes
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from teaching is less amount of money when it comes to compared to
another professional jobs
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as
doctor
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, engineer and IT developer.
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, in Myanmar, the amount of monthly income of a doctor who has five experiences in his respective field is tripled
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a
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teacher
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who has the same
experiences
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. To tackle
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issue, the government should raise the salaries significantly, which
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people to consider
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job as a profession. Another
problem
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is that children do not behave well in class.
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to say, teachers have to deal with pupils who disobey them which lead
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give up easily and make them run out of their energies for nurturing playful student the whole day. Dealing with
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issue, parents have the most responsibility to teach their
child
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children
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to act politely and have respect for their teachers, in order to make children
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behave well in class.
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, teaching has become a less popular job in recent days for some reasons like the low salaries and pupils’
behavior
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.
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is a serious
problem
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, unless we get young talented people to become a
teacher
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, the academic future of our next generation will be damaged. My view is that the main responsibility for solving
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problem
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lies with parents and the government.
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