In Spite Of The Advances Made In Agriculture, Many People Still Go Hungry. Why is this the case? What we can be done about this problem?
It is true we can find a
lot
of people
who are not getting enough supplies to eat. Even though, there are a lot
of ideas and improvements in the agriculture sector. It can be caused by many factors that will be mentioned in this
writing. The author also
will be giving the solutions for this
problem.
There are many reasons why people
still go hungry ,However
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,However
this
case is not experienced in all countries. Only several countries will be experienced this
problem such
as undeveloped nations. To start with, in some ,places we can find a lot
of natural resources, but people
who are living there did not know how to process them. So, the resources became waste and taken by wild animals. Despite making use of natural production, foreigners came and stole their resources.
We can make the solutions based on locals' and government's perspectives. First,
locals should be aware of the wealth that they have and should learn how to process it. Second,
the government should check their citizen including all the areas, to make sure they have adequate food
. If the area that has a lot
of starving people
is a rural area, then
the government should distribute the supply of meals to that place. Despite giving advances in agriculture, they can make some real actions.
In conclusion, not all countries or areas had advanced tools in food
production. Some of them still struggling and find the right way how to do it. In my opinion, as a young generation, we can make a community to distribute food
to hungry people
around the world. Furthermore
, we can make a campaign to invite people
so they will not be wasting their food
. In spite of wasting our meals, we can make a donation for people
that needed more.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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