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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the quantities of questions the customers send to the Tourist Information Office in one city from
January
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 to
June
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 2011. There are 3 different ways that they use to send their requirement.
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, what stands out from the graph is all the features experienced an upward trend with the exception of letters and email. Another striking factor is that there is a change of position in all ways. In
January
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, the way people send their questions by telephone accounted for the highest position with about 900 and
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 it fluctuated until it gained a significant increase in
June
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 at 1600.
In contrast
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, the way customers send their requirements by letter is the only one that saw a downward trend when the figure was nearly 800 and
then
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 dropped to lower than 400 in May and has not changed since that time. One prominent feature of
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 data is that telephones saw the biggest change over the period between
January
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 and
June
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.
While
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 it was the lowest in
January
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, it was the highest in
June
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 (more than 400 and 1900 respectively).

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words january, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • number of inquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • six-month period
  • increased steadily
  • reached a peak
  • decreased slightly
  • increased dramatically
  • experienced a gradual decline
  • general trend
  • highest number
  • lowest number
  • significant increase
  • tourism interest
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