Write about the following topic: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Animals

such

as

mouses

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and

monckeys

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monkeys

for

very

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long time have been used to make experiments. There are people who believe that

this

is not an

ethic

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ethical

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method and that it should be banned.

On the other

hand

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others think that these

experimentations

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experiments

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can lead to important discoveries. In my opinion, even if I feel bad imagining the treatment of the victims I actually find experimentations necessary. In

fact

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there are some

strenghts

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strengths

to focus on. In the

labs

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scientists make tests and their conclusions could

also

save lots of lives if,

for instance

, they find out a positive result on an antibiotic against a virus.

This

is a reasonable way to justify the unfair action of

sacrifiying

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sacrificing

those innocents.

Thus

, there are

not

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alternatives.

Unfortunately

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types of examinations for DNA or bacteria require the somministration into real bodies.

Furthermore

, we already kill animals

evey

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every

day in order to eat them and

also

because the taste is good. Vegetarians decide to don't buy meat and they are a clear example which shows that it's possible to grow a mindset and a diet made only of vegetables and a lot more. We could kill a small amount of those poor beings just taking advantage of the discoveries they

allows

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to

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make. In

this

way

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doctors could continue to save lives and it won't stop the scientific progress. In conclusion, animal experiments are

fondamental

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fundamental

to

apply

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the findings of

professionist

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professionals

in the chemistry sector to a healthy existence. We can't lose

this

precious opportunity because the advantages are more than the disadvantages.