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Many countries spend a lot of money on improved transport for urban areas while neglecting rural transport. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions?

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It is very imperative for the countries to maintain public
transport
 in Urben
areas
as well as
countryside
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the countryside
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 if they want to
becom
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become
establish
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 nations
among
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in
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 the world.
However
, manifold developing nations are unable to allocate funds for
well-developing
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the well-developing
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 of public
transpart
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transport
 in
urben
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urban
areas
 and rural
areas
. In
this
essay
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i
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 will discuss the problems that have
generated
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been generated
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 by
incidequate
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inadequate
transport
 and try to
provides
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 appropriate measures to cope with these problems. To commence with the predominant obstacle that produces
with
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inadequate
transport
 in remote
areas
 is dividing the communities into two segments. To elaborate on
this
, without
appropriate
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transport
 system It would be very difficult for the people who are living in remote
areas
 to access health care benefits,
good
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a good
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 education System and other basic amenities that only they can find in
urben
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urban
areas
. To cope with
this
 issue,
government
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the government
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 should divide appropriate funds to improve
public
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the public
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 transportation system in
villages
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village
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areas
as well as
 invest great funds to improve road infrastructure.
Moreover
, the problem that can be faced by the individuals who are living in remote
areas
 is the fewer opportunities to work in industrial
areas
 owing to very less public
transport
.
In other words
, The majority of folks who are remaining in villages
unable
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are unable
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 to connect with employers where
the
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they
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 can get good work conditions. To tackle
this
 hurdle,
government
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the government
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 can
tie-up
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tie up
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 with private services to make it more frequent for
public
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the public
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.
To conclude
, the horizon of
this
 problem can be massive if these
difficulties
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aredifficulties
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 unattended by lawmakers yet I believe that the situation can be controlled if public
transport
build
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builds
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 tie-up with private
trasport
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transport
.
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