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(Academic and General Training) Friendships can be very meaningful and special, but also very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?

For their relationship to be meaningful,
friends
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 need a strong and lasting
connection
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.
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 can usually be achieved through a common history and durable mutual support.
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, the challenges of life often make it difficult for individuals to keep in touch. Friendships often appear when 2 people or more share the same interest.
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, having a common enemy is sometimes a good starting point too. In any case, having something strong in common is obviously a necessary quality of good
friends
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.
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, sharing a passion for one sport, having similar hobbies or attending university together can be the backbone of a great
connection
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. Not having
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 a link can
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 weaken a friendship. When conflicts appear, it is always good to be able to come back to a common ground. Good
friends
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 are obviously reliable too. We all need to feel safe about the fact that our
friends
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 will be here for us when we need them.
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 could even be summarized in two simple questions: when one feels sad, stressed or depressed, who is he or she calling?
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, will that person answer the call?
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, even our most special
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 might be busy. He or she might be dealing with his or her own trouble as well. If it happens too often that a friend can't be present and intentional
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help, the friendship will suffer. In conclusion,
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 friendship is all about emotional
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 and mutual support.
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 the complexity of life and the effect of time can negatively affect relationships,
friends
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 who are always here for each other will certainly enjoy a durable
connection
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.

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