The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and charts provide information on how many
people
to Ashdown Museum and the feedback on satisfaction within the period before and after renovation
.
In general, the sum and satisfaction of visitors
increase after the refurbishment of the Ashdown Museum. In the beginning, the dissatisfied people
were the most responsive but it changed to satisfied visitors
after the renovation
During an old building museum, the total number of visitors
was 74000 and rose significantly to 92000 after renovation
. The result of very satisfied and satisfied people
accounted for 15% and 30% respectively in the beginning. However
, after ,renovation
the very satisfied result surged twice higher (from 15% to 35%) and satisfied
slightly increased to 35%
At the beginning of the period, dissatisfied feedback was the highest survey among others (40%) but dramatically declined to a quarter after refurbishment. Correct article usage
the satisfied
Moreover
, very dissatisfied visitors
experienced a downward trend from 10% to 5%, while
the people
with no response were still constant at 5% during the same two periods.Submitted by farisadrian628 on
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