The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? To reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In

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contemporary era, most societies own their personal

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because it will assist

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's accommodation easier and more

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. They prefer to utilize their own

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of using public transport.

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, the increasing number of societies who own their personal

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will lead to several problems, especially in our environment.

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, I believe that we should motivate

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to reduce the usage of

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. To commence, the rising number of four-wheelers on the road will detrimental to our environment

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as impacting

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condition and led several diseases. It is evident that

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release carbon dioxide and other toxic gasses from the burning of the engine into the atmosphere. These toxic gasses will impact the

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quality to become worst,

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in Jakarta the

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condition is below standard from the WMO since many vehicles operate on the street.

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,

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situation will lead to several diseases

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as ISPA or bronchitis.

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situation can happen since the community breathe unhealthy

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, which will impact their health. In Indonesia, the population of society who suffer from bronchitis and ISPA has increased over the year. Based on the mentioned effect, the government should take action in order to tackle

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problem

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as increasing the cost of petrol and providing convenient public

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. By increasing the cost of petrol, societies will think twice to utilize their own personal

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. It is undeniable that

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action will be beneficial to reduce the number of used

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on the street. Other than that, the authority should provide better facilities in public

transportation

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like establishing awesome stations or presenting comfortable seating,

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, it can attract

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to use

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public

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.

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, in South Korea most of the bus or train stations have a billboard that shows a short movie or music,

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, most

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there feel convenience using public

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. To put it in a nutshell, there are many demerits of using personal four-wheelers on the road, especially in

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quality.

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, the authority should encourage society to use public

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as an alternative way to maintain the healthier of our environment.