amaj alizadeh: some people think that individuals are becoming more dependent on each other in modern society; while others believe that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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are living as a society for ages ago ,

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they cooperate with each other and follow certain beliefs and systems too. Meanwhile,

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dependency on each other varies

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the advancement in the community.

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evokes a discussion between the advocates of being independent and the ones against it .

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essay will discuss both views before commenting on my opinion. Mankind evolves through the benefits of being a social animal. To be more clear, Apart from other animals humans form society and help each other and thrive hard to evolve as a classified species in the animal kingdom .Human

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worked together to accomplish new inventions and modified those inventions and updated them by spreading their benefits

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the discovery of the wheel came from the idea of transporting commodities faster ,

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small idea develop through social commitment and discussion and end up in carts to engine-driven cars . To add on human being needs to be more supported by other people in all their emotions . Even though man learns to live alone , he looks for a shoulder in his emotional breakdowns, which will help him to sustain himself in the walks of life .

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,the high magnitude of advanced technology helps human

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to be more and more independent .

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modern amenities and the establishment of mechanisation human world tries to do tasks individually without others' help ,

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becoming independent individuals . For,instance heavy jobs which need coordination and help from others , now can be done with the help of technology by the individual alone.

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,technology in communication helps humans to communicate with robots and get advice and help whenever needed , hereby human

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becoming more and more independent .

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, after evaluating both views , I strongly believe that people are becoming more independent than their previous generations . Though he needs to be emotionally connected with others , with the help of modern inventions humans will surpass dependency and would become more self-centred and less dependent.