Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where the did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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people
think that particular Use synonyms
professions
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as doctors and engineers, should be Linking Words
work
in the same nation where they get training and education. Meanwhile, others believe that those professionals should Use synonyms
be
get free choices to Unnecessary verb
apply
work
anywhere not only in the Use synonyms
place
they get Use synonyms
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their degree
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work
in different countries from their Use synonyms
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university
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people
can Use synonyms
work
everywhere as long as they are fulfilled the specific employee requirement.
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people
who Use synonyms
work
Use synonyms
in particular
expertise need to Linking Words
work
in the same Use synonyms
country
they get education and training. The reason is there are knowledge and skills regarding Use synonyms
to
specific cases Remove the preposition
apply
that
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is
only happened in the specific Change the verb form
are
country
. Use synonyms
Thus
, Linking Words
this
profession should study, get Linking Words
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degree
, and get training in the same Add an article
a degree
place
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with
their future Change preposition
as
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work
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workplace
place
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there is Linking Words
also
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profession
that relates Add an article
a profession
with
cultural background, so that Change preposition
to
this
expertise can be applied only in the same nation. Remembering every Linking Words
country
has Use synonyms
their
own cultural background. Correct pronoun usage
its
For example
, doctor specialists in Linking Words
Indonesia
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is
one of the Change the verb form
are
professions
where they only get Use synonyms
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degree
and skills Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
in
Change preposition
from
Use synonyms
university
in Correct article usage
a university
Indonesia
to Use synonyms
work
in Use synonyms
the
Indonesian hospitals. Correct article usage
apply
This
is Linking Words
also
applied Linking Words
for
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to
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psychologist
, to earn Fix the agreement mistake
psychologists
Use synonyms
degree
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a degree
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psychologist
in Replace the word
psychology
Indonesia
and to be able to get Use synonyms
Use synonyms
psychologist
license, it just can only get from Correct article usage
a psychologist
Use synonyms
university
in Correct article usage
a university
Indonesia
because Use synonyms
this
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professions
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profession
relates
to Change the verb form
relate
Indonesian
culture.
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the Indonesian
On the other hand
, there is Linking Words
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a contrast
contrast
view about the previous argument; Wrong verb form
contrasting
people
should be free to contribute their experience Use synonyms
in
everywhere without Change preposition
apply
a
boundaries in Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
certain
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the certain
Use synonyms
country
because of their training places. I believe that as long as someone who fulfilled certain positions in the Fix the agreement mistake
countries
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work
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workplace
place
, they can Use synonyms
work
in there. Use synonyms
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is Linking Words
due to
working experience will help Linking Words
people
to be Use synonyms
expert
after years of working in the field. So it cannot be Fix the agreement mistake
experts
problem
if someone Add an article
a problem
get
their education from another Change the verb form
gets
country
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, learning in different Linking Words
Use synonyms
country
will broaden a horizon that will help Fix the agreement mistake
countries
people
to face Use synonyms
problem
in Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Use synonyms
work
environment. Add an article
the work
a work
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is
will be beneficial Unnecessary verb
apply
from
an industry or institution to get Change preposition
for
fresh
perspective from Add an article
a fresh
people
who graduated abroad. Use synonyms
For instance
, Cognitive Behaviour Therapy (CBT) is one the skills that Linking Words
also
can learn from Linking Words
Use synonyms
university
in Australia in which there are a lot of CBT experts in there. Fix the agreement mistake
universities
This
skill is required in Linking Words
Indonesia
to treat Use synonyms
patient
with Fix the agreement mistake
patients
post traumatic
disorder.
Add a hyphen
post-traumatic
To sum up
, there are two different views Linking Words
regard
certain Change the form of the verb
regarding
professions
Use synonyms
should
or should not Correct pronoun usage
that should
work
in the same Use synonyms
country
where they got training. It is true that Use synonyms
for
some professionals Change preposition
apply
such
as doctors and Linking Words
Use synonyms
psychologist
need to acquire a Fix the agreement mistake
psychologists
degree
in the same Use synonyms
country
because of the specific cases and cultural background. Use synonyms
However
, I believe as long as Linking Words
people
can pass the Use synonyms
work
requirements; it would not be Use synonyms
problem
to Add an article
a problem
work
in Use synonyms
the
different countries. They can adjust quickly and can be Correct article usage
apply
expert
in the field after years of working experience.Fix the agreement mistake
experts
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