Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where the did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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number of Correct article usage
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people
think that particular professions
, such
as doctors and engineers, should be work
in the same nation where they get training and education. Meanwhile, others believe that those professionals should be
get free choices to Unnecessary verb
apply
work
anywhere not only in the place
they get Correct pronoun usage
their degree
degree
but Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
also
work
in different countries from their university
. Fix the agreement mistake
universities
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essays
will attempt to elaborate both of those views and my personal opinion is Fix the agreement mistake
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people
can work
everywhere as long as they are fulfilled the specific employee requirement.
On the one hand, people
who work
in particular
expertise need to work
in the same country
they get education and training. The reason is there are knowledge and skills regarding to
specific cases Remove the preposition
apply
that
is
only happened in the specific Change the verb form
are
country
. Thus
, this
profession should study, get degree
, and get training in the same Add an article
a degree
place
with
their future Change preposition
as
work
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workplace
place
. Moreover
, there is also
profession
that relates Add an article
a profession
with
cultural background, so that Change preposition
to
this
expertise can be applied only in the same nation. Remembering every country
has their
own cultural background. Correct pronoun usage
its
For example
, doctor specialists in Indonesia
is
one of the Change the verb form
are
professions
where they only get degree
and skills Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
in
Change preposition
from
university
in Correct article usage
a university
Indonesia
to work
in the
Indonesian hospitals. Correct article usage
apply
This
is also
applied for
Change preposition
to
psychologist
, to earn Fix the agreement mistake
psychologists
degree
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a degree
psychologist
in Replace the word
psychology
Indonesia
and to be able to get psychologist
license, it just can only get from Correct article usage
a psychologist
university
in Correct article usage
a university
Indonesia
because this
professions
Change the determiner
profession
relates
to Change the verb form
relate
Indonesian
culture.
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the Indonesian
On the other hand
, there is Correct article usage
a contrast
contrast
view about the previous argument; Wrong verb form
contrasting
people
should be free to contribute their experience in
everywhere without Change preposition
apply
a
boundaries in Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
certain
Add an article
the certain
country
because of their training places. I believe that as long as someone who fulfilled certain positions in the Fix the agreement mistake
countries
work
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workplace
place
, they can work
in there. This
is due to
working experience will help people
to be expert
after years of working in the field. So it cannot be Fix the agreement mistake
experts
problem
if someone Add an article
a problem
get
their education from another Change the verb form
gets
country
. Furthermore
, learning in different country
will broaden a horizon that will help Fix the agreement mistake
countries
people
to face problem
in Fix the agreement mistake
problems
work
environment. Add an article
the work
a work
This
is
will be beneficial Unnecessary verb
apply
from
an industry or institution to get Change preposition
for
fresh
perspective from Add an article
a fresh
people
who graduated abroad. For instance
, Cognitive Behaviour Therapy (CBT) is one the skills that also
can learn from university
in Australia in which there are a lot of CBT experts in there. Fix the agreement mistake
universities
This
skill is required in Indonesia
to treat patient
with Fix the agreement mistake
patients
post traumatic
disorder.
Add a hyphen
post-traumatic
To sum up
, there are two different views regard
certain Change the form of the verb
regarding
professions
should
or should not Correct pronoun usage
that should
work
in the same country
where they got training. It is true that for
some professionals Change preposition
apply
such
as doctors and psychologist
need to acquire a Fix the agreement mistake
psychologists
degree
in the same country
because of the specific cases and cultural background. However
, I believe as long as people
can pass the work
requirements; it would not be problem
to Add an article
a problem
work
in the
different countries. They can adjust quickly and can be Correct article usage
apply
expert
in the field after years of working experience.Fix the agreement mistake
experts
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