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The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day.

The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day.
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The given map illustrates the comparison of a particular locale between 1965 and nowadays. In brief, the area has been developed since 1965, and a lot of dwellings were installed from 1965 to now. In the past, there were a few things in
this
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 place
such
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 as trees and Ashford. On the right
side
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 of upward of the
river
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, there was Asshold, and trees were on opposite sides.
In addition
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, the
road
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 did not continue from the left
side
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 of the
river
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 to the right
side
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,
thus
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 people had to utilize Ferry for moving over the
river
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. In the present day, one bridge
that is
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 used by cars was constructed over the
river
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, and one more bridge for walking is going to build in 2010 downward of the
river
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. A
road
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 in the
north east
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northeast
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 was narrowed , and it divides Assford house. There are a lot of dwellings on the left
side
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 of
this
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road
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, and 5 huge residences are on another
side
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.
Furthermore
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, a
car
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park
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 was added
at the end
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 of
this
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road
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,
also
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 the apartment was constructed on the right
side
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 of
this
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car
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park
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.
Subsequently
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, There is an additional
car
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park
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 between the
car
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 bridge and the
river
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,
then
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 one more
park
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 will be built in 2010 near
footbridge
Correct article usage
the footbridge
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side, river, road, car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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