The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.
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The bar chart given depicts the accommodation preferences (self-catering, caravan, camping, and hotel) by citizens from England, Scotland, Wales, and Northern
Ireland
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when they went on vacation in the year, 2010. The unit is measured in percentage.
Overall
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, the hotel was the most popular accommodation among the British people.
In contrast
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, camping was the least choice for a holiday. Looking into the details, hotels were exactly half in England and Scotland, and around 40 per
cent
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in Wales and Northern
Ireland
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. The second position was Self-catering. It can be seen that there was up to 20 per
cent
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for
this
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option in England, Scotland, and Wales.
On the other hand
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, there was making up 10 per
cent
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in Northern
Ireland
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.
However
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, Caravan was the second rank for the accommodation choices in Northern
Ireland
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with 30 per
cent
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. But, in the other three countries, caravans just had under 10 per
cent
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.
Moreover
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, camping was the unpopular choice for travellers in that four countries since the proportion was a minority, only 10 per
cent
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.
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