The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The diagram shows a road map of a sports court before and after the renovation in the years 1990 and now respectively. The club have undergone many changes in the layout, many new activities are introduced like basketball, a fitness centre and of tennis area and a swimming pool has

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upgradation.

Firstly

, the old car parking space is demolished and a new sophisticated badminton ground.

Furthermore

,the yards have doubled from 2 previously.

Secondly

, Basketball space has been built in the top right corner replacing the park.

Additionally

, the sunny outdoor pool has been upgraded to

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indoor one .Surprisingly,both the cafe and the reception remained constant throughout the years.

While

,previously changing rooms were laid next to the help desk are now is moved to the right, just behind the fitness centre,

this

new zone is brought up in the old tennis court.

To conclude

,after making amendments, the club has more facilities like an indoor diving pool, fitness centre, and basketball court.with the similar help table and

restaurant

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restaurants

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over the ages.

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