Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture.

Every
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has its own traditions and customs that represent the uniqueness of the practice itself. In relation to
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, I agree that dancing is one of the tools
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able to introduce the values of a practice of a region
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and to promote the identity of a
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globally. There are several main points why dancing plays an important role in promoting one's
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.
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dancing is often created by a group of people that agree to introduce their
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to others through a simple way that could allow others to learn and participate. In
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case, every dance
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created involves certain values, norms, and beliefs of the
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. Which , the outsiders who visit that area and learn the dancing will surely learn and understand not only the movement
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but
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the language used as a message to introduce the
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itself.
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, dancing can be a tool to represent the Identity of a
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. Most of the time during international events, dancing is usually used in the opening ceremony. The purpose of performing dancing in
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case is to introduce the identity of the host
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to the guests that perhaps never recognize or heard of the
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of the
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itself.
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, in World Cup 2010, the dancing Waka-waka from South Africa used to welcome guests from all over the world. Later, the dance became very well-known as the dance of South Africa.  In conclusion, I agree that dancing is really important, it is one of the ways to tell other people about the traditions, values, norms, and beliefs of our perception.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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