The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps display the development of roads to reach the main hospital in the years
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2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, the area is more built up. Differences can be seen
such
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as modifications in the vehicles park, in roads accessing the hospital and in a new construction.
Firstly
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, it is noticeable that the bus stop located on the east side of the hospital in 2007 had disappeared and it had given place, in later years, to a roundabout. As far as changes are concerned,
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the staff and public car park that were in the same place, through the years were dissolved into two parks, one for staff, the one that already existed, and a new one, immediately right to the hospital, was built for the public in general.
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, the Hospital road was expanded and two roundabouts were constructed in order to make a connection to a new bus station in the Southwest of the City Hospital that did not exist in 2007.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • carriageway
  • roundabout
  • dual
  • interchange
  • pedestrian
  • footpath
  • commuter
  • facilities
  • accessibility
  • congestion
  • transit
  • urban planning
  • modernization
  • demolished
  • erected
  • adjacent
  • connectivity
  • redirected traffic
  • enhanced
  • displaced
  • underpass
  • bypass
  • renovate
  • capacity
  • upgrade
  • satellite view
  • aerial perspective
  • layout
  • zone
  • implemented changes
  • decongest
  • flow of traffic
  • vehicular movement
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