The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009

The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of wristwatch sales by six different watchmakers in Switzerland in 2020 and 2021.
Overall
,
Rolex
was the most significant supplier by far in both years.
Rolex
also
rose its dominance, whilst all other companies lost market share in 2021. The three biggest watch manufacturers in 2020 were
Rolex
,Omega and Cartier, with %39, %15.5, and 14,5%, respectively.
However
, whilst
Rolex
increased its share to almost half, Omega saw a notable decline to 12.7%. Despite a minor decrease of 0.7% to 13.8% in 2021, Cartier replaced Omega as the second-highest watch brand in 2021. The remaining three competitors had roughly a tenth of the total in 2020 each, but all fell by around 1% in 2021. Patek Phillipe fell the most, dropping from 10.3% to 8.8%. Auto Pelline went from the smallest share in 2020 to the fourth largest company in 2021, achieving a percentage of 9.1%.
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