The diagram below shows the manufacturing process from making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process from making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process chart illustrates how
sugar
is made from the
sugar
cane source.
Overall
, it can be seen how the process starts and how many steps are needed to accomplish the final product. In ,total there are seven steps that use both manual and machinery force. First of all, after 12 to 18 months of farming, the harvesting is made in both manual and automated ways. After that, a machine is necessary to crush the
sugar
cane in order to transform them into a kind of juice or paste.
Then
,
the next step is
to purify
this
paste with a specific tool called a limestone filter in a great heated container.
This
container has a source of heat above it and acts like an evaporator. Following that it is expected the juice to become a syrup.
Next,
the same recipient has a centrifuge in it that separates the
sugar
crystals from the obtained syrup.
Finally
, the
last
step is reached where the final product is left to dry and cool and
subsequently
ready to use.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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